The Door

There are few objects more ordinary than a door. We pass through them a dozen times a day without thought. They separate rooms, mark boundaries, provide privacy. But in horror, doors carry far heavier meaning. They become symbols of fear—of what lies beyond, or of what might cross through when we least expect it.

A closed door conceals. It withholds knowledge. On the other side could be safety, or danger, or something unspeakable waiting in the dark. In many ghost stories, the creak of hinges or the slow turn of a knob is enough to freeze the blood. The imagination rushes to fill in what we cannot see.

An open door, by contrast, strips away security. It doesn’t matter whether the opening reveals an empty hall or a gaping void—the unease comes from the vulnerability.

This thought feels especially true with Halloween just around the corner, as kids are preparing to go door-to-door, visiting the homes of strangers in exchange for candy. A terrifying thought.

Throughout horror literature and film, doors appear again and again as thresholds between worlds:

  • In Gothic fiction, the locked chamber is the place where dark secrets are hidden (Jane Eyre, Bluebeard, The Turn of the Screw).
  • In supernatural horror, doors often mark the boundary between the living and the dead (The Haunting of Hill House, The Others).
  • In modern horror cinema, think of how many iconic moments rely on the image of the door—the axe smashing through in The Shining, the eerie red door in Insidious, the gate to Jurassic Park, the door to the juke joint that the vampires can’t enter through without permission in Sinners.

A door in horror is never just a door. It’s a promise, a warning, a dare: open me if you’re brave enough.

Which brings me to a short story of my own, called The Door.


The Door

The girl strained against the door, wood groaning, hinges shrieking, as something outside pulled at the latch. Her mother, beside her, gave a quiet, wordless whimper. The girl laid a hand on her shoulder, trying to soothe her.

“Shhh,” she whispered. “It can’t get us in here.”

The door rattled again.

Her mother whimpered again. Always the same sound.

She had been like this for some time now. The girl didn’t know what exactly was wrong with her. They didn’t have enough money to summon a doctor, and even if they did, she didn’t trust that a doctor could help. Her mother had a broken heart, the girl figured—same as her. Ever since her father had left them to fend for themselves all those years ago. She’d been taking care of her mother ever since.

The door shuddered. The girl yelped.

“Leave us alone!” she shouted, still rubbing her mother’s shoulder.

Outside: a scrape of nails on wood.

A heavy breath.

An awful stench.

The smell reminded the girl of the time their cat had crawled under the floorboards to die alone. She’d found it by stench alone, scraping her elbows raw as she pushed past cobwebs and the husks of pillbugs to find the poor thing, bloated by rot and half-eaten by worms. It was the smell of death.

She smelled it now, a pungent odor seeping in beneath the door. Whatever monster waited outside wasn’t living. That much, she knew for certain.

“Go away!” she screamed. But it gave no answer.

She had dragged the piano over to the door, somehow found the strength to shove it up against the latch. It was now the only thing—besides her own stick-thin body and her mother’s frail weight—holding the door in place. And to think, when the winter had grown cold enough that they could see their breath drifting through the house and their fingers had felt like they were burning, she’d almost torn the instrument apart for firewood. The only thing that had stopped her was her own wishful thinking—the hope her mother might one day be well enough to play again. She could close her eyes now and hear the sound of it drifting through the kitchen, the bedroom, the doorway.

Her mother hadn’t gotten well again. But the piano was here, and it was the heaviest piece of furniture they owned. Thank God they’d kept it.

The door began to splinter.
Her mother gave another thin, hopeless whimper.
Shhh.

The wood cracked. The piano screeched across the floor, carving a deep scar into the boards. The girl strained, throwing all her weight against the door, feet sliding backward as the barrier gave way. The door heaved like it was breathing, hinges shrieking in pain, wood groaning as if it were alive.

Another whimper.

Shhhhhh.

Cracks spread like lightning. Ravenous breathing filled the quiet. A growl vibrated through the wood, deep and monstrous, prickling her skin.

“Mother, get back,” she said, dragging her by the wrist.

That same sound repeated, that same awful whimpering sound, louder now.

It was no use. The door was little more than a few splintered pieces clinging to rusted hinges. It would soon give way, and the girl didn’t want to be near when that happened.

Her mother gave no reply except to repeat her refrain, a quiet, wordless whimper. But she let the girl lead her over to the far wall. Together they pressed their backs against it, trying to make themselves small, to disappear, as the door split apart.

The piano toppled with a crash so violent it sounded like all its notes had been struck at once—a terrible, discordant finale.

Her mother gave one final, wordless whimper, then fell silent, as the monster’s face caught a flicker of candlelight in the doorway.

For a moment, the house itself seemed to hold its breath. The girl and her mother exchanged a look. Her mother’s expression softened, serene. The whimpering ceased.

The girl’s face went bloodless. For a heartbeat, she thought she saw her father. The shape was wrong, the smell was wrong—but there was something in this monster that was familiar.

The mother’s eyes filled with recognition, but the girl shook her head. Her mouth worked soundlessly. No, no, no.

Her mother slipped from her grasp, stepping toward the shattered door.

“No!” the girl shouted, finally finding her voice. “No!”

But her mother paid her no mind. Her eyes were fixed on the figure in the doorway.

The girl couldn’t remember the last time she’d heard her mother speak. But now she turned, gave her daughter the faintest hint of a smile, and whispered: “It’s all right, my love.”

And then, without another word, she crossed what little remained of the short distance to that horribly familiar figure.

“It’s not him!” the girl screamed. “Don’t go!”

Her mother didn’t answer. Not even a whimper.

The monster stepped forward, rancid breath rolling across the room. It seized her mother by the shoulders, claws yellow and curved, sinking deep enough to draw blood. And still, her mother’s face remained serene.

The creature dragged her into the night. The smell of rot lingered after it vanished into the darkness.

All was still.

All was quiet.

Except for the ruined door, swaying on its hinges, wide open now—like a wound that would never close.

And when the door stilled, another sound filled the silence: the sound of the girl’s wordless whimper.

2 responses to “The Door”

  1. Wow, a simple, no-frills monster story, most fitting for Halloween eve. Fine work, Mr. Raffle, and thank you for sharing. Doors and horror. Never thought about it before, but they really do go together like peanut butter and jelly!

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    • Thanks Jack! I had fun writing this one. I do often use the “closed door” technique fairly regularly in my own writing, and I imagine many horror writers do this subconsciously if not deliberately. Hope it inspires you and other writers to employ this technique.

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